Friday 18 October 2019

Persuasive writing

Yesterday the 17/10/19 my class did some persuasive writing about should schools do athletics or not. Here is Mine.


Should every school do athletics? Agree? Disagree?

Do you think every school should join in and do athletics?
Well I think every school should. Here are
Three reasons why I think schools should do athletics.




My first reason is because it is good exercise
for your body. There are all different kinds of activities
to participate in.
There are 5 different sports to do. E.g: shot put, discus,
running,
high jump and long jump. Those are the ones you can
get for the
West Coast athletics and then if you do well you go to
Canterbury.
There are also just fun little games to play like:
two legged
race,
egg and spoon race and rainbow parachute with balls.




My second reason is because athletics is fun.
It’s fun because
all activities are different, some are hard and some
are easy,
some are boring, some are fun. My favourite is
shot put
because it is easy for me and I like trying to get the
ball over the point and if I get it over the line/point
I get
in for West Coast athletics. To get in to West Coast
you have to have at least two or three things to get in
otherwise it doesn't count and you don’t get in for West
Coast.
I have been in West Coast before and I felt so proud.





My third reason why I think schools should athletics is
because after you feel good about doing it and if you got
in you should feel really proud. And if you didn’t get at least
you tried your hardest in all the activities you did. If you
didn’t get in don’t sulk because of that because i
t’s not being good sportsmanship.



Those are my reasons why I think
schools should do athletics. Do you think
schools
should
do athletics or not.
17/10/19.

Writing by Ruby L Coppins.

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