Hi Ruby it's Abbie from Grey Main School.I really like how you have been truthful by adding that your clumsy!!!Next time you could add that you are a certain person from a book or movie because you have the same likes or hobbies as them.Cant wait to see your next blog post. Bye,from Abbie
Kia Ora Ruby, My name is Honor from T2. I really like your post on a Metaphor poem. You have got some really good descriptions. I now know that you are funny and clumsy. Maybe next time you could desribe more what you like. For example, I am a ballerina because I like dancing. Otherwise it is really good. Noho Ora Mai From Honor.
hi Ruby my name is Aoife and i love your work i love the way you found good pictures and how you expressed your self.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby it's Abbie from Grey Main School.I really like how you have been truthful by adding that your clumsy!!!Next time you could add that you are a certain person from a book or movie because you have the same likes or hobbies as them.Cant wait to see your next blog post.
ReplyDeleteBye,from Abbie
Kia Ora Ruby, My name is Honor from T2. I really like your post on a Metaphor poem. You have got some really good descriptions. I now know that you are funny and clumsy. Maybe next time you could desribe more what you like. For example, I am a ballerina because I like dancing.
ReplyDeleteOtherwise it is really good.
Noho Ora Mai From Honor.
Kia Ora Ruby, it's Kaleb here from Totara 2.
ReplyDeleteI really like your metaphors. They are great. Maybe next time you could embed your drawing instead of taking a screen shot.
Anyway Great blog post. Keep up the great work.
From Kaleb