Friday 6 March 2020

Diamante Poem

Yesterday I started a diamante poem but I didn't finish until today. My poem is about the Sun and Moon.
Here is my finished piece.



4 comments:

  1. hi ruby my name is Tupou from Glenbrae School i really like your poem and it is amazing keep up the good job and blog more.

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  2. Kia Ora Ruby this is Arli from Grey Main school I really like your diamante poem how you put colours and made it creative and also made it the sun and moon 2 things.
    what do you like better the sun or the moon?

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  3. Hi Ruby

    Hope you are doing ok at home during this Level 4 lockdown?
    This is a great diamante poem that you have posted here! I really like the colours that you have used to show this too.
    It would be great to see if there are some activities that you would like to have a go at during your time at home.
    You should go and check out the Totara site, it has some good work and some great fun activities for you to try as well!
    Have a look at the recipes that you can try! Maybe you might be able to give these a go at home?
    I look forward to reading some more of your work over the next few weeks!

    Talk again soon!

    Mrs Costello :)

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  4. Kia ora ehoa!?Hello my friend! How are you Ruby?
    Its great to reconnect via your blog. I miss all of your old Totara 4 kids.
    Your acrostic poem is sweet. I like the phrase "celestial body"! I will forward to seeing your next blog post.
    Just before lockdown I bought a book called the Jacqualine Wilson Quizbook. Its all fun trivia about her books. I know this is your Kid's Lit speciality so I'll lend it to you when we are back training. Have you read any good books over the last few weeks?
    Hope you and your family are all warm and safe.
    See you,
    Mrs Gully

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.