This week for my writing task we had to make a poem about Autumn and not use the word Autumn in the poem. It actually wasn't that hard as I thought it would be. Here is the finished product!
Kia ora Ruby, You have described some key seasonal changes beautifully. I have been watching birds gather in the sky near my home and think they will be flying away to somewhere warmer. There are lots of birds around my house too, looking for food. I like the autumn coloured backround, clear bold font and balnced format of your poem.
Great job with this post, I like the way you have done an autumn coloured background. I also like how you have used lots of descriptive language. Keep up the great work and the great posting. Molly :)
Hey Ruby this is Pitara and I am a year 7 student from Glenbrae school we are your buddy class. Keep up the awsome work your writing has so many details about autumn keep up the awsome work
Hey Pitara, I will definitely keep up the writing! I'm glad you think it's very detailed it took quite awhile for me to think of all the details. From Ruby
Kia ora Ruby, You have described some key seasonal changes beautifully. I have been watching birds gather in the sky near my home and think they will be flying away to somewhere warmer. There are lots of birds around my house too, looking for food. I like the autumn coloured backround, clear bold font and balnced format of your poem.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job with this post, I like the way you have done an autumn coloured background. I also like how you have used lots of descriptive language. Keep up the great work and the great posting.
Molly :)
Hey Ruby this is Pitara and I am a year 7 student from Glenbrae school we are your buddy class. Keep up the awsome work your writing has so many details about autumn keep up the awsome work
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Hey Pitara, I will definitely keep up the writing! I'm glad you think it's very detailed it took quite awhile for me to think of all the details.
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