Thursday 28 March 2019
Brunner Mine poem
Today my class to make a poem about the Brunner Mine. Then we had to write the poem neatly on to a piece of paper then decorate it . I glued my piece of paper on to a blue piece of paper the decorated the blue piece of paper. We also had to put the poem features. Mine were alliteration and onamatipaia and rhyme and metaphor . Here is my work
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This looks really cool Ruby but I can't read the poem :(
ReplyDeleteYou'll have to read it to me sometime!
Kia ora Mrs Gully sorry about the small writing other wise you could only see some of the writing. Sure ill read it to you one day. From Ruby
ReplyDeleteHello Ruby it's Niah from T4
ReplyDeleteI like how you write a poem. But next time make sure that you can see the poem. But other wise it is good.
Did you like the brunner mine site?.
Good bye.