Here is my writing.
April fools day
Today is April fools day on a Saturday.
My friend Molly came round to my place to
hangout for a bit. She forgot it was
April fools day. We went to the beach
I made a mote for Molly then I scared her with
a Stoat a slithery soft Stoat. She let out
a loud scream SCREAM!! We went home
before she came in my room I quickly
filled a bucket of cold water then put it
on top of my door she walked in. The water
went SPLASH all over her. She yelled
AHH! I quickly went to get her a towel. While
I was gone Molly went to in to MY lolly jar
and put 4 chocolate buttons into her
mouth then quickly chewed them up put
them on one of my tissues then I heard
her scream AHHH! I ran into my room with a
towel. I dropped the towel. I let out a
gasp. GASP!! I thought I saw some poo on the
floor. Little did I know that it was
chocolate. Molly said ( A bird flew in your
room and pooped right there.) she pointed to
the “poop” on a piece of tissue paper. But I
saw some blue in it. Its was a Chocolate
button. And I started sarcastically laughing.
She asked ( what was so funny.) And I said
( like that is poop.) We both laughed. It was
near bedtime and Aoife was coming over for
a sleepover well Molly was already here.
Molly and me were planning some really
funny pranks for Aoife. First we were
planning to her chocolate filled with caramel/
mustard. Then we were planning put
strawberry sauce in her burger instead of
tomato sauce. When Aoife finally got here
we gave her the chocolate. Her reaction was hilarious she spat it out and said ( what is the
disgusting stuff?.) Molly and me laughed.
We said ( HAPPY APRIL FOOLS DAY!!) We
all laughed. Next was dinner time. Before she
came out for dinner I told her I was going toilet
but really I was going to get the strawberry
sauce and squirt it in her burger. When I did
that I told them both dinner was ready but I
didn’t remember witch had the strawberry
sauce so I gave Molly the burger with
strawberry sauce. We were all so hungry that
we all just bit into our burger but Molly spat it
out straight away.She said ( EWW what is in
this burger.) Aoife and me laughed. I said ( it
was strawberry sauce.) We all laughed.
HAHAHA. When it was time for bed Aoife
Molly and me were planning to prank to my
parents. First we were going to knock on there
bedroom door KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK. Then
when they woke up we are going to splash
them with cold water. SPLISH SPLOSH
SPLASH. But first we have to wait till midnight.
While we wait we are going to eat the
lollies from my *lolly* jar then we will watch
youtube on my tablet. Finally it’s midnight
time for the prank. Quietly we walk to my
parents bedroom and knocked on the door.
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK. We heard them
nervously talking. We quietly filled a bucket of
cold water. We opened the door slowly then
chucked the water at then ran to my room.
It was the next day and we ate more lollies
out of my jar. We went to mcdonalds for
breakfast. Then we dropped Molly and
Aoife of to their homes. I came home and
thought in my head ( i’m so glad april fools
day is over.) Just as my luck got better lewie
came home.
My friend Molly came round to my place to
hangout for a bit. She forgot it was
April fools day. We went to the beach
I made a mote for Molly then I scared her with
a Stoat a slithery soft Stoat. She let out
a loud scream SCREAM!! We went home
before she came in my room I quickly
filled a bucket of cold water then put it
on top of my door she walked in. The water
went SPLASH all over her. She yelled
AHH! I quickly went to get her a towel. While
I was gone Molly went to in to MY lolly jar
and put 4 chocolate buttons into her
mouth then quickly chewed them up put
them on one of my tissues then I heard
her scream AHHH! I ran into my room with a
towel. I dropped the towel. I let out a
gasp. GASP!! I thought I saw some poo on the
floor. Little did I know that it was
chocolate. Molly said ( A bird flew in your
room and pooped right there.) she pointed to
the “poop” on a piece of tissue paper. But I
saw some blue in it. Its was a Chocolate
button. And I started sarcastically laughing.
She asked ( what was so funny.) And I said
( like that is poop.) We both laughed. It was
near bedtime and Aoife was coming over for
a sleepover well Molly was already here.
Molly and me were planning some really
funny pranks for Aoife. First we were
planning to her chocolate filled with caramel/
mustard. Then we were planning put
strawberry sauce in her burger instead of
tomato sauce. When Aoife finally got here
we gave her the chocolate. Her reaction was hilarious she spat it out and said ( what is the
disgusting stuff?.) Molly and me laughed.
We said ( HAPPY APRIL FOOLS DAY!!) We
all laughed. Next was dinner time. Before she
came out for dinner I told her I was going toilet
but really I was going to get the strawberry
sauce and squirt it in her burger. When I did
that I told them both dinner was ready but I
didn’t remember witch had the strawberry
sauce so I gave Molly the burger with
strawberry sauce. We were all so hungry that
we all just bit into our burger but Molly spat it
out straight away.She said ( EWW what is in
this burger.) Aoife and me laughed. I said ( it
was strawberry sauce.) We all laughed.
HAHAHA. When it was time for bed Aoife
Molly and me were planning to prank to my
parents. First we were going to knock on there
bedroom door KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK. Then
when they woke up we are going to splash
them with cold water. SPLISH SPLOSH
SPLASH. But first we have to wait till midnight.
While we wait we are going to eat the
lollies from my *lolly* jar then we will watch
youtube on my tablet. Finally it’s midnight
time for the prank. Quietly we walk to my
parents bedroom and knocked on the door.
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK. We heard them
nervously talking. We quietly filled a bucket of
cold water. We opened the door slowly then
chucked the water at then ran to my room.
It was the next day and we ate more lollies
out of my jar. We went to mcdonalds for
breakfast. Then we dropped Molly and
Aoife of to their homes. I came home and
thought in my head ( i’m so glad april fools
day is over.) Just as my luck got better lewie
came home.
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